Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 Words At A Time, Part One

This is part of another flash fiction challenge from Chuck Wendig at terribleminds. The task this week is to write the first 200 words of a story. Next week, and the three weeks after that, you grab someone else’s partial story and add 200 words until there are a bunch of 1,000 word stories written by five people each. Sounds like fun. Here’s my first installment, which I’m thinking of as “Blackout” but who knows what the next four people will come up with, if anyone even picks it.

The text message wouldn’t send.

                That was the first clue that something was wrong. It didn’t seem like a clue at first. It just seemed like she’d lost connectivity, which happened in some parts of the city. A quick look at the screen showed “No Service” at the top left corner. She turned off the phone, hoping that she’d get a signal once it re-started, and she could let Dave know she’d be late because the bus hadn’t come on time. While waiting she looked up, and noticed that while she’d been occupied with the phone the city had gone dark. Street lights were dark. The condos across the street were dark. The traffic lights at Kingsway and Edmonds were dark, and there was, in fact, no traffic at all.

                There must have been an accident somewhere, she thought. A bus hit a pole or something, so there’s no power and traffic is stopped. It was a clear night, and the full moon lit the streets, so she decided to walk to the train station. Ten or fifteen minutes on foot beat waiting for a bus that might never come.

                She’d almost reached the station when she saw the rats.

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3 responses to “Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 Words At A Time, Part One

  1. Pingback: Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 Words At A Time, Part Two | The Zombie Chimp

  2. I’ve picked your piece of flash fiction for Part Two, hope you like where I am going with it. 🙂

    http://www.thezombiechimp.com/2013/11/30/flash-fiction-challenge-200-words-time-part-two/

  3. Pingback: Flash Fiction Challenge: 200 Words At A Time, Part Two | Keyboard Pizza

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